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I put the mistakes I made and how I fixed them so I could avoid making them again the next time I write that kind of genre. For example, I received feedback on my online article that helped me make it look and sound more like a news article by using neutral language.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"ORE","dateCreated":"1321469299","user":{"username":"sherrymi","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sherrymi","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/sherrymi-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/comp1Colleen+Funck\/276183124?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"46446852","dateCreated":"1321469299","smartDate":"Nov 16, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"sherrymi","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sherrymi","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/sherrymi-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sherrycomp10a.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/46446852"},"dateDigested":1532252734,"commentId":"768724","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Goal D: Students will be able to inte...","description":"Goal D: Students will be able to interpret and compose in a variety of genres and print\/non-print media.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThis flyer uses both print and non-print media because it includes text and images. I used both text and images in this genre to make an argument about stopping school violence. I chose images from the Columbine shooting that would appeal to pathos. I used text that would be informative about the event and also advocating for a cause.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Genre 1","dateCreated":"1321469299","user":{"username":"sherrymi","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sherrymi","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/sherrymi-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/comp1Colleen+Funck\/276183124?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"46446848","dateCreated":"1321469299","smartDate":"Nov 16, 2011","userCreated":{"username":"sherrymi","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sherrymi","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/sherrymi-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/sherrycomp10a.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/46446848"},"dateDigested":1532252734,"commentId":"859514","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Goal A: Students will be able to comp...","description":"Goal A: Students will be able to compose for particular audiences and purposes<br \/>\n<br \/>\nIn this genre, I changed the layout and the language to look and sound like an online article. This meant using professional alignment and formal language appropriate to an adult audience reading to find out what happened online.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nGoal C: Students will be able to read, select, and use evidence critically to formulate and support arguments.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThis genre fulfills the goal because I used evidence from my research to provide a neutral report. I wanted the article to show sympathy for the killers as well as the victims. For example, I gave information about how they had been picked on.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Genre 4","dateCreated":"1321469299","user":{"username":"sherrymi","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/sherrymi","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/sherrymi-lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/comp1Colleen+Funck\/276183124?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}